It's a soothing poem...reminds me of the character Caleb from that story. I loved this line.

Honestly, there is nothing left

I thought that was really good. I enjoyed this one a bunch!
Charisma*

Is the enemy the sun?
Just from what i gathered from the wording. I could be wrong.
But excellent poem. Very fluid like and calming yet with some very deep meanings
At least, thats what i thought, lol
5/5
*Gem*

Very cool, somehow reminds me of a native american speaking.... which is a high complement coming from me. 4/5

Smooth flow of words!!! I like it!!!....well penned...Keep it up!!! God bless!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

Pretty :)