A Silent River

by Midnight Sun   Feb 14, 2007


In the dark depths
Of the silent water
Lies a story, a secret
Of a girl once slaughtered

The innocent went missing
The body never found
The river holds the secret
But the story's in chains, bound

Her soul lies washed
By the water's smooth caress
It's forceful current
Leaves her hair a mess

Her parent's will never know
And can't say goodbye
They walk upon that shore everyday
And into that water their tears cry

But the knowing river
Refuses to share their right
They'll live forever wishing
They'd kept her closer in sight

*I know it's a pretty dark poem, but I am really proud of it. So I'd really appreciate feedback. Thank you! :)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Very good. i like your style of writing and you can find good words to rhyme!

    ~~Ashley~~

  • 17 years ago

    by JiKaRiN

    That's full of emotions! I liked the way you wrote it!.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee nichole

    I would be proud of that poem too...it was great! i mean the story was pretty sad but most poems are sad...and i like the idea that these people walk by so often and "into the water thier tears cry" but they dont even know that shes right there :)

  • 17 years ago

    by RaiNe

    ..thank you for your comment too..
    ..i like this one,
    ..i used to like sad mood,.
    ..hehe,=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    That was a great poem good flow, its really dark and sad