by Midnight Sun Feb 14, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
In the dark depths |
by Ashley
Very good. i like your style of writing and you can find good words to rhyme! |
by JiKaRiN
That's full of emotions! I liked the way you wrote it!.. 5/5 |
I would be proud of that poem too...it was great! i mean the story was pretty sad but most poems are sad...and i like the idea that these people walk by so often and "into the water thier tears cry" but they dont even know that shes right there :) |
by RaiNe
..thank you for your comment too.. |
That was a great poem good flow, its really dark and sad |