Candy Hearts

by hana heroin e   Feb 15, 2007


This is something true
Thoughts of me
Thinking of you

Ask me miss you love me kiss you
The messages on the chocolate hearts
Call me hug you fax me be true
Their words so simple and desired
For a candy surprise

Something only a candy could say
Something someone could never match
Bear hug one love always pray
So lift the latch on your heart

You know Ive been here from the start
Maybe I dont have it all
But maybe youre all Ive got

Maybe I love you
Perhaps Ill be true
Or maybe Ill cheat
But babe
Youre hard to beat

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    The first time I read through this I did not comprehend it at all. So, I read through it a second time, and got a gist of what it was saying.

    I felt that there was absolutely no flow in your poem. I mean, your rhyming was erratic and I could not expect where you were going to rhyme next.

    Please, do not take this in a harsh way. I am just trying to let you realize your weak points in your writing.

    I don't want to discourage you,
    but I gave this a 3/5. that means it's Fair. & that's saying it nicely.

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