Aww, got me right in the heart that did! Wonderfully written, and good rhyme with a good flow. Wow, you're pretty good. I'll have to read more.

Wow that was really good it made me miss my boyfriend. Its like you have been watching us and you put my feelings that i have for him in words. Beautifully written keep up the good work.

That is beautiful. reminds me of my loving boyfriend.

What a wonderful poem. Your love really shines in this. Great job!

This is an amazing poem!!!!
Its great!!! Keep it up
shannon<3

I'm sorry to say this......but V-day sucks old man balls....

Dam that is friggin good. and i mean that is a good way. dam i wish i could write like that.. love sam

Aw that was so sweet.. I loved it.. I really like fresh little poems like this you did a really good job.. and its very lucky that you have somoeone who makes you feel that way, a lot of people go through life without ever findind that someone, the ones who do are extremely lucky and should hold on to that.

Omg another great poem of yours 5/5 keep it up.

Very sweet poem indeed. It's so genuinue and real. I particularly liked how your poem interwines

"YOU HEAR WHAT I DON'T SAY..
I SEE WHAT YOU DON'T SHOW.."

That's what love is ... two hearts interwined together as one, complimenting each other. Great write. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Awww... this is adorbale... im not sure why its all caps though..? :/

anyways... the emotion in this poem AGAIN is wonderful.... you really let all your feelings known... wonderful choice of words.. definitly my favorite poem so far... beautiful job

Wow. the caps really stands out. this poem was incredibly sweet. the one inside this poem--i love them already!

beautiful.

Hey guys, i know its annoying in capitals, but it wont edit!! so this will have to do :O)
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.