A very sweet and sad poem about love, one should never hide thier feelings but we do out of the fear of getting hurt :(( 5/5

Awwwwww! omg i felt like this before... you're a great writer. i can relate to most of your poems! great job!

This was cute. There were some rhythm problem, but those are easily sorted. The only problem is, it's hard to write a poem like this without sounding cliche.

This is a sweet poem. you really shouldnt hide your feelings no matter haw bad he hurt you. i know it is hard, but if you dont, it will eat at you untill u do.
A great job. 5/5

Kalee

I like the ending and if you are hiding feelings from someone let them know before its to late

Wow, the poem is really nice, yet it seems kinda unfinished...iunno...mayb you cou;ld try doing a sequel to it, like what you/she decided to do

I can relate. you have a gift... you really do. and don't lose it :)

I think tht ur poems are good for people to relate to...which is a good thing isnt it =) it related to me..and u hav a good way to express ur self good poem

MM. again. I can relate. Your poems seem to be very easy to relate to. I understand what you are saying in these pieces. Nice job. There were typos in a couple of places. Just read it over, and you'll find them.

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Great poem I feel the exact same way about a guy right now I'm caught in the middle but now I know. Couldn't have said it better!!!!!!5/5