If You Only Knew

by ILOVEMRCUCUMBER   Feb 15, 2007


If you only knew,
Just what I go through,
Everyday and night,
Because nothings ever right,
I'm tired of keeping it all inside,
Don't want to run, Don't want to hide,
My life isn't perfect, it never makes sense,
I am NOT spoiled, Why do you treat me like this?
You get under my skin,
Because you know it's so thin,
So just admit it, b||ch,
You want me dead in a ditch,
I'm not going to take this s/h\|/t,
I won't stand it, I won't take your next hit.
For i will be dead,
Won't that make you glad?
That's what you've wanted, ever since we met.
But, sweet child, don't fret,
I shall be with you, until indeed, You're dead.
I will make you feel, hopeless, like you want to be shot in the head.
Just like you have made me feel for these past 4 years,
I'll make you cry, those sweet crimson tears.
So have fun, Lindsey, while i torture your soul,
You shall come to know, just what depression holds,
I can't snap out of it, I can't quit being weird,
I shall never stop, never stop!, being feared.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Alright. Interesting, but cliche as h-ll. [Not good]
    My advise:
    First off, you're rhyming is decent. Keep up the rhyming at that will get better with time.
    Secondly, make your lines about the same syllable count [if one is five, make them all four to six syllables in lenghth].
    And thridly, stay away from cliche topics. I know poetry is about letting your emotions go, but let them run free and be more descriptive. Let your emotions go, but find an interesting way to describe them. Alright? =]
    If you have any questions, feel free to contact me. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex