Hey, awww that was really something hunny, I so know that situation... but mines more complicated well i don't know your story, so I can't say that, but mine is complicated........ but yes I know what you mean...... Try to fix up some of the grammar simple things like an s on the end of words... or maybe just one word.... and use question marks..
But besides that, I really loved it,
keep up, you are very talented,
(I hope ur lover feels like the jerk he is for hurting you)
kac xx