Break my heart

by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm   Feb 15, 2007


We were meant to last three months..
Or so we were told..
I'm sorry I wasn't what you wanted..
And I didn't fit the mold.

Today is your birthday..
I sit here and think of you..
I let go of my angel..
And I still don't know what to do.

It's hard to love someone..
Who doesn't love you anymore..
Even if there's someone else..
I'll still love you like I did before.

I hate it how we can't seem to get along..
And how we always fight..
But most of all I hate it..
Because you're always right.

I'll never stop loving you..
Even if it breaks my heart..
It's OK..
I'm used to the sound of it slowly ripping apart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    The rhymes are good... the whole topic is a little too cliche for me... and the flow was off in places.. however... once again you described your emotions very well ... :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw this is sad, its always sad when a love ends but try and think on the bright side this just means that there is someone better out there for you. You will realise this in time and then it wont hurt so bad. Nice write though.
    "I'll never stop loving you..
    Even if it breaks my heart..
    It's OK..
    I'm used to the sound of it slowly ripping apart."

    I loved this stanza its my favorite out of them all.. it sends a very good message to what you are feeling

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Too bad love and pain go togather hand in hand...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim the Star

    Great poem! =]
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel mac

    Hey good poem !!!

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