by Daniel mac
Hey good poem !!! |
by Kim the Star
Great poem! =] |
by Solus
Too bad love and pain go togather hand in hand... |
Aw this is sad, its always sad when a love ends but try and think on the bright side this just means that there is someone better out there for you. You will realise this in time and then it wont hurt so bad. Nice write though. |
The rhymes are good... the whole topic is a little too cliche for me... and the flow was off in places.. however... once again you described your emotions very well ... :) |