The pain within

by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm   Feb 15, 2007


If i could show the pain within..
My body would burn with a thousand fires..
My wrists would be bound with a million wires.

My eyes would cry an ocean of tears..
My voice would scream a whole world's fears..
My heart would bleed a river dry..
It would spell out the words, "I try".

My bones would break..
From every mistake..
My soul would take over your heart..
And the pain within would rip you apart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    If there's a word better than excellent thts the word i'd use to describe this poem !
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Not my favorite.. its not bad at all.. it just didnt capture me as much as the others did... i think its because your not spilliong out your emotions as much here.... its a cute poem..very simple words... dont get me wrong... simple is good... its just my personal opinion .. i prefer to really feel what the other person feels :D

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