Not my favorite.. its not bad at all.. it just didnt capture me as much as the others did... i think its because your not spilliong out your emotions as much here.... its a cute poem..very simple words... dont get me wrong... simple is good... its just my personal opinion .. i prefer to really feel what the other person feels :D

If there's a word better than excellent thts the word i'd use to describe this poem !
5/5
love
amy