Hmmm.
comparedto the others this is somewhat disappointing I guess.
Sorry It just doesnt give me the same buzz.
3.5

I honestly liked it. Nicely set up, nicely written. Ive got nothing bad to say! no critisism.
Its nto an amazing poem, but theres nothing that can be done to make it better, because it is wht it is. Its there, its itself, and its complete.