Would Anyone Care?

by Kristina   Feb 15, 2007


Sometimes I feel so sad,
And I'm not sure what to do.
Should I talk to someone,
Or just keep it inside?

Does anyone even care,
What I'm going through?
Would they even listen,
To what I had to say?

I just wanna cry sometimes,
I feel so all alone,
But when I look around,
I got friends surrounding me.

Can I really talk to them?
Can I let them know what is wrong?
Are they really here for me,
Or just here to watch me fall?

Copyright © February 15, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Ooh. I loved the last two stanzas! The third made me think that the friends are the heroes of the poem, but it turns out that is even questionable. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by resisting reason

    I liked it. true friends are hard to find but when you do you can rely on them for anything. it took me along time to figure that out. its a nice poem none the less. maybe you could read some of mine

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Very nice, I like it, Good length for a poem of it's style, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Nice poem...as i usually do i comment more on the content seeing as i really am not a huge fan of poetry and dont know all that much about it. so...if i were you i would open up and talk...thats what i do and it helps...but it is not for everyone. You can always msg me if you want to talk...i listen to everyone...it helps me to help others...and i forget some of my own problems. Oh and a side note a friend and i started a new poetry club, feel free to apply...i dont handle the accepting, i leave that up to the boss haha....the club is 'poetry world domination'

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I know how you feel never keep it inside nice job