I'm here for you! lol, but seriously, if you ever wanna talk my myspace and msn are on my page here. Anyway this is another good poem. Though I do have a suggetion, try expanding your vocab a little. overall 5/5

marcella

Very well written and emotion shows well,what a crisis is right keep up the work i'll look at more.

Whoa the emotion here is simply strong. wat word can i use. perfect wording, amazing flow and it tell the reader of a short story.

awesome. 5/5 David

Awh really sad=[ but really good writing.

Itz true wat u poem says u just dont know if they will listen 2 u or just let u down, itz just how life is, well 5/5

I know how you feel never keep it inside nice job

Nice poem...as i usually do i comment more on the content seeing as i really am not a huge fan of poetry and dont know all that much about it. so...if i were you i would open up and talk...thats what i do and it helps...but it is not for everyone. You can always msg me if you want to talk...i listen to everyone...it helps me to help others...and i forget some of my own problems. Oh and a side note a friend and i started a new poetry club, feel free to apply...i dont handle the accepting, i leave that up to the boss haha....the club is 'poetry world domination'

Very nice, I like it, Good length for a poem of it's style, 5/5

I liked it. true friends are hard to find but when you do you can rely on them for anything. it took me along time to figure that out. its a nice poem none the less. maybe you could read some of mine

Ooh. I loved the last two stanzas! The third made me think that the friends are the heroes of the poem, but it turns out that is even questionable. 5/5.