by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm Feb 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
"This is it" he says, turning his back on her sin.. |
Aww.... this is so sad.. but still so sweet ..lol :]P anyways... this is a very heartfelt poem... my suggestion though is to keep the format the same throughout the poem... dont change it from four lines to two lines... and beacuse of the way you rhymed your poem.. it can work either way... it just doesnt fit when you put in both the two lined stanzas and four |