This is sad. So full of emotion. Nicely done. Rhythm and rhyme are good.

Very very sad.. it hurts when the one person that you need to lean on doesnt realise your pain and acts like its not there, especially when you aren't strong enough to tell them how much your hurting. I hope that you feel a bit better now, cause the emotion in here was so raw it reminded me of a time when I was a lot worse off. I loved the words though thanx for sharing this with us all. Things will get better, just try and stay strong.

Very raw emotion. I feel your anger so strong. Excellent.

Ooh wow, very emotional. It was more sad then love-like. This really sounds like a sorrowful song, maybe you should think about making it into a song if your a musical person. The rhyming flow once again, was phenominal. Nothing seem forced, strong words, my favorite stanza:
"Don't tell me it's OK..
Don't hold my hand..
You don't know sh1t..
Don't say you understand."
I know how you feel.
I think I'm going to add you to my favorites..yeah I am. You and your poetry deserve it.
5/5

Wow i liked it so much it is just a thing that guys do,you expressed it pretty well
Keep up the good work
Laura

Aww.... this is soo sad.. the ending was very unexpected.. which i like alot.. a very enjoyable read.. i LOVE these lines

"Don't scream at me..
I'm too far gone.."

and...

"If this is you leaving..
Don't ever return.."

..AMAZING... :D