This was another good one, though I found the flow a little broken. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Very passionate and emotional

I can relate to this a lot.. It was very sad and emotional. The flow was very good. Um, I don't really see any flaws in it. So great poem! 5/5

Keep writing!
Cayce

Hmm. this was a good poem. emotion ran through this like crazy. its not your best, but i still love it!

This was really sad. It flowed great. The emotions just poured out of it. it wasn't my favorite of yours, but it was still really good!

Bri x

Aching, pain and suffering. It is spine tingling, tear quaking, pain staking and emotion shuddering.
Very powerful words and again excellent rhythm.
5.5
- Em