Just a girl

by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm   Feb 15, 2007


Just a girl looking at him..
Gathering all her courage within..
Just a girl asking a guy..
"Maybe, could you please, give us a try"?

Just a girl watching the clock..
Giving away the key to a lock..
Just a girl sitting by the phone..
Listening to the familiar dial tone.

Just a girl without a clue..
Never knowing what he will do..
Just a girl lost inside..
Drifting along with the ongoing tide.

Just a girl..
Forgotten by a boy..
Played with and broken..
Just like a toy.

Just a girl..
With a shattered heart..
Ruined and damaged..
Right from the start.

Just a girl..
with a red wrist..
Praying for a love..
That doesn't exist.

Just a girl..
With a blood red tear..
Just a boy..
Without a care.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Rose

    THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE POEMS...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow. This was really good! I loved the repetition of ''just a girl'' and then at the end it switches to ''just a boy''. The last stanza was my favorite. Cos of the fact that you switched over. & it really summed the poem up.

    It flowed really well & Nothing seemed forced. Excellent job.

    Bri x

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aw. your rhyming is amazing. ok. i need to stop reading your poems and start looking at that thesaurus right now!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    WoW I just love the way you wrote the poem, the words you used....5/5 great job keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Simpsons rule

    Wow brilliant i thought the continous input of just a girl would ruin the poem

    but how wrong was i!!

    The continous input of just a girl makes the poem flow so well!! well done brilliant!

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