Her

by amoxi   Feb 15, 2007


When she laughs do you see the truth in her eyes?

Do you see shes living a lie?

Do you see the hurt when she smiles?

Or have you been too busy all the while

Do you flinch when she sheds a tear?

Or do u block it out so u cant hear

Do you care when you are beating her?

Do you think about what effect it will have on her?

Do you know she goes to school and gets made fun of?

Or do you just write it off as childish jokes

Do you look close enough to see the suicidal thoughts?

Or do you look past that and say her friends hot

Do you care about her at all?

Or are you just waiting for your woman to call

Did you ever think she would kill herself?

Or were you preparing to take the whip off the shelf

You walked in and saw her

But all you could think to do was kick her head

When you look back do you think about;

If you saw the hurt when she smiled

Or were you just too busy all the while

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  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Very different from the your new ones..
    it rhymes so well!

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow, this is a really poerful piece. You write with great emotion, while keeping a nice flow. Dark, yet beautifully written piece. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Very very very wel written!
    loved the flow of the poem...
    though u asked questions,,, u even answered them all... you really got the talent... keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So questionable thing,i really liked it,
    keep on writing honey you have skills
    Take care of yourself
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This poem was dark in all its darkness but some things, when read, just got me out of the mood...for example "Or do you look past that and say her friends hot".&& "But all you could think to do was kick her head"...i dont know what about these two lines throws me off but its something about the randomness that has nothing to do with darkness..all else was vell written and had a good flow.

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