Your stories seem that they won't have an end but it's really cool,keep them coming,and take care of yourself honey
See ya

This poem was dark in all its darkness but some things, when read, just got me out of the mood...for example "Or do you look past that and say her friends hot".&& "But all you could think to do was kick her head"...i dont know what about these two lines throws me off but its something about the randomness that has nothing to do with darkness..all else was vell written and had a good flow.

So questionable thing,i really liked it,
keep on writing honey you have skills
Take care of yourself
See ya
Laura

Very very very wel written!
loved the flow of the poem...
though u asked questions,,, u even answered them all... you really got the talent... keep it up!

Wow, this is a really poerful piece. You write with great emotion, while keeping a nice flow. Dark, yet beautifully written piece. 5/5

marcella

Very different from the your new ones..
it rhymes so well!

keep it up!