Wow, this was so succint yet so daunting and twisted. the ending was just amazing with strong impact.

Wow this was really good...it was full of strong emotions and the ending really tied it all together definitely 5/5 keep it up!
x!x

It could flow better but it's quite good. I really like the way the emotions come out. Loved the word choice though. Nice work.

I love all of your poetry.
the ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.