Woooooooo great quetions. Nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |
by Yuna
I really enjoyed this poem of yours. It brought thoughts to mind, and kind of reminded me of some of my writing. The style is perfect and really makes a good poem when put with words. Keep writing! |
by DFunK
This is a few good questions.. |
by Curry
This poem is amazing! i love love love it! you are an amazing writer! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Your writing is just beautiful. The only error I found was the typo--How do but a stop |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is really good. All i can say is hang in there (if this happened in real life) and things will get better. 5/5 |
by love
This is one of the poems that comes true in my life and all i can say is hold on. It gets better! Your are an incredible writer and i envy your work Keep it up! |
That poem was incredible! i loved it. healing a broken heart is impossible, the pain numbs but i dont believe we ever really heal from true heartache. well done! xoxo |
by Shelby
Daamn i know exactly how this feels. I love this poem omg you are such a great writer! keep it up! |
by kimara4955
That is a great poem, as everybody asks them question, i have so mant times n still do about the same person its been two years and i still ask them. you are a very talented writter, and have great potential as a writter. if you would will u read a one of mine n comment plz xxtake carexx |
by Brianna
I love you poem deep thought and everything you said was true. I love your writing it seems as if u put a lot of thouht into it ....your words make me wonder about the love I had for someone that never fades away...why? I don't know |
This was amazing. great flow and the message is clear and understandable. it can be related to easily. i love to structure. it was a good way to modernize the ever famous "heartbroken" poem. |
by Kaliyah
Omg. Im About Ta' Shed A Friiken Tear Here Omg Lol. |
by Heidi
This piece brought tears to my eyes because I feel the exact same way. betrayal is soemting common and i suppose we may be going through the same thing. i loved it |
Another masterpiece, Brilliant...God I loved this poem, is is so well written and your talent is unique =0) |
by Nikki
Another really good poem I love the way you write you do such a awesome job. 5/5 |
I can truly say that I relate to your poem....you are really good... there is only a three letter word that I can think of to say, and it doesn't describe it enough....WOW |
I can relate to this soo much. It is really good. Keep writing. |
I love it!! |
Im asking these questions to myslf as we speak good job on getting ur thoughts on paper so deeply.keep it up.. i look forward to more of ur poems |