Goodjob. i like it alot. 5/5

Thanks for the comment. Wow, you captured the feeling of love quite well actually. Its a difficult thing to do unless you're in it. Well done. 5/5

Really cool!

It's a poem so many can relate to. Yet, I can't brush away the feeling that it's just not finished.
PV

Like this one a lot, great exprssions in last 2 lines well done