by Dark Demise
I like it and everything, just alot of parts it lost it's flow alot, I think with a little tweaking to it, It would be a great poem =D, it's very deep, And good meaning though,and over all a good poem, keep it up =) |
by jazmin
Wow!!!!! i feel like that in a way... i broke up wit my ex and now i regret it!!! good job |
Thanks for the comment |
by Em
So heartfelt. 5/5, Em |