Nicely written, the flow as well as the structure was great. The meaning behind this poem was fantasitic. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Even though I'm in a loving relationship, I dislike Valentines day, not because I'm bitter or anything, just because it's such an emotional day that while half the world is blissfully in love, the other half realise just how alone they are.
This was a nostalgic Valentines poem.
I loved the third stanza, it describes my nan perfectly the day she met my grandad, they have both passsed now though.
I know you were getting there in the second to last stanza, but I still feel the last stanza ends a bit abruptly.
Thanks for sharing.

Thanks alot for the tips on mine! i thought haikus was just a way how to WRITE it :P thanks

now to the poem: this is what true valentines day is...not some commercial stuff!

Absolutely loved it. the detailing and emotions in this....amazing. u did an extremely good job. keep up the great work. 5/5

This was really good. I loved the title of it :] So very catchy. It flowed really well, & was very descriptive. The wording & vocabulary was amazing. It was very heartfelt.

Brings crystal tears to my eyes.

^ I love the imagery in this line.. This was so beautiful.

Amazingly penned.

Bri x

I love the use of adjectives in this poem! 5/5