From the east

by christopher dflcs   Feb 15, 2007


Six suns around my head
burning bright
they bend and fall
returning to the ground
to bloom again

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  • 17 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Small but good. I can really add onto what is there even after the poem is done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Sorry, but this is another example of your smart and sincere skill being skittled by an abruptness that leaves me feeling shortchanged. I am DYING to read something of yours that takes me on a journey or paints me a picture of depth and beauty.

    Keep 'em coming though! I am not trying to knock you down, I am trying to build you up! :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very beautiful write.

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very beautiful write.

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