Short but well written...please keep writing and I will keep reading 5/5

O i'm adding it to my favorites.
keep it up
i loved it
5/5

Love it! haha 5/5

hmmm... change the last stanza and youre good!

An old woman
telling a story
by firelight

Instead of

An old woman telling
a story by firelight

It just makes it look more pretty haha and my OCD hurts me on that. Love it though... i cant ever write poetry in this form. I lose focus! Great work

Beautiful dear, utterly ahmazing.

Love it... I like reading short poems that makes me really think like this one... keep it comin... 5/5