Really good poem 5/5

Really really good poem 5/5 i love it

Very sad. Awesome poem. 5/5

D_P

I love the way that you wrote this, exspecially toward the end. It seemed tome that you wanted to represent that she was dying by writing less. *5/5*

Alyson

Omg this is really good....and so so sad.. good job!

I scared a bit,not a good story but men like that everyttime exists,but i really liked the flow

You wrote this really well. It's a sad story, but you penned it perfectly. 5/5

marcella

Wow...that is maybe one of the most depressing poems I've ever read. You did a fantastic job. 5/5, cause u literally made me cry. This is a very powerful piece.

Very good poem i love the way you made it all fit togther,
A very sad story though!
keep up the great writing!