Together As One

by Anime Lover   Feb 15, 2007


The ocean so lovely
The sun about to set
I gaze into your misty eyes
You make my heart flutter
Your arms wrap around me
You pull me in closer
My heart against yours
Yours against mine
They beat as one
Laying my head on your shoulder
I whisper in your ear
"I Love You"
In return you lean in for a kiss
Ending the day
Together as one...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I thought this was a sweet poem. However, the quotes kind of threw off the flow. I try not to use them in poems too frequently because of that reason, because it's almost as though you change the tone of the poem.

    other than that, it was a good poem. 4/5

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