Just wanted to say this, on twelve it should say then we go to college, instead of I we go to college. For some reason the edit didnt work.

Awwwwwww i loved it i really did i liked how u worded it, its def one of my favs of urs..so far. hope to read more 5/5 always
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Hey Nathan, really liked this one. Keep up the good work. Luv Ya! your Lil' Sis~Morgan~

Very very nice.5/5