Very nice ; }

I'm so good! thank me! jk im not that conceited. ( at least i don't think I am..)

2 b honest i dnt reali like the last ssshh but the rest is good.. jus the last line =]
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U are sooo good tara really i love it
niice

Your poems are smooth and contain good flow.

i only found one error:
My heart is breaking with my silent screams
My feeling[s] pour down my face like streams

This poem is so sweet dear. I found lucidity in this piece and your wordings are beautiful. Kepp up the great work. Tc

You deffiently have a way with words exellent job 5/5

This was an intresting poem. i know the feelin. buti did rate this a 4 cause is seemed kinda edgy when i was reading it.. but although it still was a good poem

One remarkable poem i have read yet today. Each word flowed in its own sentence. I find this poem sad, as well, touching. Very Well. 5/5

-Sarah A.