by veeda Feb 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I am sorry it had to end like this. |
I liked it because it shows how much you really love him despised the hurt. |
I Like This Poem Ur Very Creative!! |
Big words lol |
I liked that poem, But I really feel it could be better....at the end "i promise" that was a bit random.... I think it could be more attached to the poem in a better way...but I'm not really sure..... |
U r pretty good. It was very heart-felt-sadness. Keep it up |