You're right. It really does make you think.

Wow zi really really enjoyed this one. I loved your repetition of "Blink" And wow it makes you think a lot. The flow was really very good. I loved the format you put the poem in. I loved the way you worded it. You have a lot of talent.

Keep writin!
Cayce

Wow, this poem was...it was too go for words it was great, i dont even know what to say to explain how good it was i really enjoyed reading it you're a great writer 5/5

This is amazing. great concept. i love the effect of the word 'blink'. so good! great visual words. 5 for you!!