Comments : Willing

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    What does it take,
    to fix a mistake,
    what do I need to do,
    what does it take,
    to fix what I break,
    and make it all up to you,

    That was my favorite part. I actually like this one.. A tiny bit! WOO. Movin' up the latter, Jeffrey. :] Good work. 4.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    Beautiful write my friend. I loved every line.