What a beautiful story!! i loved it well done x5/5

Wow so interesting story but it will be a good idea to make blanks after a stanza,it would be less complicated i mean,but other than that it's awesome

Very good story!!!i really like the ending

Everyone above me is right, it's a beautiful piece and i agree with the last line..
There's just something about those eyes of the one you love...
5/5
*Gem*