by amoxi Feb 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I love you like i breath the air |
Aww this was awesome. it flowed perfectly. |
Nicely written, i thought theres were one or two forced rhymes but nothing too important...i loved the emotion, and the sweet feelings you talked of...well done:) |
by Tricky Daze
It is good that your heart sings that time,i hope that lasts a life time,good job |
by N J Thornton
Breathe even....:) |
by N J Thornton
Sweet. I think you mean "berathe." |