Sweet. I think you mean "berathe."

Breathe even....:)

It is good that your heart sings that time,i hope that lasts a life time,good job

Nicely written, i thought theres were one or two forced rhymes but nothing too important...i loved the emotion, and the sweet feelings you talked of...well done:)

Aww this was awesome. it flowed perfectly.
much love and many kisses,
bex