Last Breath

by LonelyKnights   Feb 16, 2007


Promise me you will be there when I die.
For what is the purpose of dedicating my last breath to you,
if your not there to feel the last of my love as is leaves my body forever.
I wish you to be the last thing on my lips,
and the last thing i hear.
I will love you till my dying breath.

.:.Blue_Jay.:.
10:23 16/02/07

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  • 17 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Babe, you're awesome. I love you so much. You are the greatest thing to happen to me.

    "if your not there"
    --your = you're.
    Capitalize your I's ; ).

    Love you always sweetheart, don't stop writing, kay? xox

    --Lady Sorrow♥.

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