Wow. revenge, oh sweet revenge.

it reminded me of my poem 'mistaken', except this was much better.

i really liked this one. 5/5.

So, she's a bit of a psycho then?
I guess when a relationship get so bad, it only takes one more thing for someone to snap. You told the story well.
In places there was an odd flow, but the whole subject was odd so it kind of worked.
Oh and clever way of getting around the inapropriate text error.
Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful... great flow, great wording, as always! 5/5

SWEET, SWEET REVENGE. that was amazing. i could see the whole thing clearly. It was amazing. I cant stop saying it, it was amazing.

(thanks for the comments u made on my poems)

Kalee

Oh wow...I absolutely loved this!
I thought the imagery and wording used were breathtaking and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and I thought it flowed very well.

Excellent poem!
just e.x.c.e.l.l.e.n.t.!!!
the descriptions and everything in this poem are sooo flowing. the metaphors and the symbols aswell!
the stanzas are all perfect!
wow! keep up the great work, poet!
5/5

Wow, i loved this. i could almost taste the sweet revenge!!
much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow.
Just scrolling back I can see the length of the poem but when reading it everything just blended in due to the great flow & ideas.

"She giggles as he realizes,
that he is g.u.n.n.a die.
His neck chained to the bottom,
he loses breath with every try."

^^ I loved that stanza because it showed she was human too, not just a physco*.

Loved your chosen vocab and you really did an excellent job on this one.

:]

Revenge is indeed the sweetest of all emtions. I loved this poem it was truly amazing. Again I couldn't take my eyes off it, and the word choice was so great that its brillantancy can not be expressed in words alone. You really outdid your self this time. I mean it your words are great, your work is wondeful. 5/5

First stanza?
Wonderful.

Dishonoring her dignity,
turned out to be a sin.
That didn't really flow that well.
Seems pretty forced.
Maybe you could change it into
The dishonored dignity
Turned out to be a sin

[[Louring]] her prey,
It's luring, dear.

her muscles it flexed.
That's a strange line.

Like I said.
I don't like the profanity in the ending.
It's really... random to me.

All in all, it was okay.
Not the best, I've read.
Also not the worst.
4/5?

To me this piece was much better then the last I read. I loved the flow it didn't seem to stray what so ever throughout the entire thing. The first stanza was great it caught my attention and got me hooked. This poem seemed kind of like a chant to me because the flow was so smooth. Word choice interesting. Overall I enjoyed this one a 5/5~mel

Oh wow. This was yet again a very great read. Thanks for sharing it with me. Such a deep poem, great flow, word choice is outstanding without a doubt.. Um, definatly had me from the beginning and throughout the entire poem til the end. You did a faboulous job again. I keep saying the same thing over and over. You are a true example of a great poet! Great work, keep blossoming as a writer :] 5/5