WOW!! i really like this poem. i think you should have broken it up a litte differently like into stanza's but other then that great job! :]

Wow must have been hard

Amazing job! this was defiantly a very well written poem! i can relate to the words you wrote! keep writing, hun! 5/5

~Kristina

Amazin poem loved the lines "For every fault I ll take the blame
So your world can keep on turning" well done xx