Wow this is so good. I wouldn't change anything at all. 5/5

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From the poems i have read you seem like a very loyal and protective person. great qualities for a friend. =]

awesome.

Awesome. beautiful. i really woudlnt change anything about it, the flow is good. the wording is good.

This is amazing.
The first stanza had me hooked and it just kept getting better and better!
The imagery you used was fantastic, and I thought the flow worked very well.

Good job. I think it could be better if you add more variety and images to the vocabulary.

This was beautiful, and really sweet
5/5 it flowed gorgeously.
i lovd it.
luv gabriella