Epic Tragedy

by LithiumSacrifice   Feb 16, 2007


She is the heart torn

And the poems burned

She is a mask worn

For each and every hurt

She had been waiting

For the only light

She finds herself debating

If this is worth the fight

The only thing that tied her to

To what she once believed

Was that you said, I love you

And that you would never leave

She didn t think it was goodbye

She had thought you would come back

How you had torn down her blue sky

And painted her heart black

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Awesome poem, very deep, very good word usage, great emotional writeing, nice work, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I can relate a lot to this. The flow and the rhymes were both good. Overall this was a nice poem. You did a lovely job expressing the emotion in it. Well done!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The emotion in this poem was wat i call eletric! it was intence! i loved it. sad but very enjoyable to read.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Really good. great job! the flow is good & the wording is good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. i think you did a great job writing it. i really like what it says in the poem. keep writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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