The Cave

I enjoyed this it is very good beautifully written

I really enojoyed reading this, i've never really read one quite like it. i loved the 'drip drip drip'. the imagery was great, i could see the whole scenario in my head,

great writing.

Ally. x

This poem's alright.

I like the fact that's it's unique and I love the use of the word gelid lol. I love seeing words you don't see every day. It makes for a much more compelling piece. though I wish you would have used more words like it. Overall I liked the stroy it told and you told it well. Good read! 5/5

marcella

Wow, a very different style. I give you kudos for experimenting with different styles or making a different kind of rhythm - it's refreshing to see something new, and to see someone trying to play up poetry to something 'modern'. I liked it, sort of 'story telling' poetry. It has progression, and I liked the rhythm of each stanza. 'Cept, I don't like the exclaimation marks. I'm one to hate those in poetry just because I feel like it makes the poem loose the eerie essence it is intended to have, and when you put exclaimation marks in there, I feel a 'cheesy' vibe. But I love it, I love the speaker questioning themself. Great Job!