News that shocked...

by June   Feb 16, 2007


Watching the news ,
I heard a familiar name.
A young man had died ,
what a crying shame.
The name played on my mind ,
so I rang to ask my mum.
Thats when she told me ,
what I heard left me numb.
The young man who died ,
was my cousins son.
He had been attacked ,
don't know why it was done.
A blow to the head killed him ,
it all happened so fast.
Now things are coming out ,
not all good about his past.
Why should the past matter ? ,
no one deserves to die.
Only 23 with a whole life ahead ,
his family left in pain to cry.
He was on his way to the shop ,
attacked by 3 in the street.
Is nowhere safe anymore ? ,
will the bad ever be beat ?.
Makes me so angry to see ,
what this world is coming to.
Why so much hate and hurt ? ,
what more must we go through ?.

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  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    So very true.. sorry to hear about the loss. i like the way this poem was expressed. i always wanted to tell a story in a poem but it never worked for me.. nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Omg! That's so sad! Very well writen and amazing flow keep up the amazing work. Please check out some of my poems too!