Comments : Maybe In The Next Life

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    Wow Richard; This poem left me nearly speechless. It has such strong emotion and so much power behind each line. It's very creative also and the imagery is a plus. This poem tells the story of many people including myself at some point of time in my life. You have a magnificent talent when it comes to pulling the reader in and captivating them. You're amazing Richard; and when the day comes that you become one of the worlds greatest poets remember that Letty told you first. LOL.

    Kudos
    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    Um. I feel like crying a little bit to be honest. That was incredibly sad, and it gave me goosebumps.

    You really have a way with words, there is no arguing with that. I can't even think of any suggestions to make this better because I was completely drawn in from start to finish.

    Take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    Richard. Richard. Richard.
    That's about all i can say.

    That was AMAZING.
    It had so much power and emotion i was almost in tears.

    GREAT JOB (:

    keep writing.
    laurie.