Cuts Leave Scars

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Feb 17, 2007


"Cuts leave scars..."

And you don't think I know that?
I've gone through too much,
And dealt with all the scars.

See,
Here they are to prove it.

It's life,
But most importantly love.

You keep running until you get there.
Once you do,
You begin a climb,
And you keep at it until you fall.

You fall hard,
Cutting yourself in many ways,
Life becomes difficult,
And making it through seems too hard.

You run,
You climb,
You fall.

A cycle that repeats,
Everytime you love.
Only ending,
When you find the one,
The one who will boost you to the top..

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This was a reponse poem. Yea, this sucks. Help would be appreciated.

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Hey hun, i knew this poem looked familiar, i already commented it under bex, before i changed my screen name, its excellent!
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    I deffinitley have to disagree with you. :] I don't think this sucks. I think it's very honest & true. It flowed really well. & Had a wonderful meaning. Everything seemed to fit in so well. It had a lot of emotion in it. & Also some imagery.

    Doesn't suck :]

    Beautifully penned.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Ya i think all people who cut, go through this in some way or another...they know the consequenses but can't stop
    it's like an addiction
    well put

  • 17 years ago

    by fakesmile

    I love it soo much!

  • 17 years ago

    by Yuna

    I am not sure I can help, but I did like this poem. It was true, and I think that many people would agree. Great job!

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