I think it was really good! cause you caught the emotion, and the words were o kay, but i think ya might just want to read it over again a few times, and see if there are any parts that you would like to adjust.
luvd it!
gabriella

I dont know about others , but i thought this poem was so original in its format..and had such nice points...well done 5/5

I didnt think this poem sucked at all i think u did a great job on it keep em coming

This poem doesn't suck and it appears I am not alone with that opinion so u r out vote so there. ha lmao.

I thought this is was a great poem. I personally am not a fan of non rhyming poems but this was great. Keep it up. God Bless 5/5

<3Tayy

It doesnt suck...
atcually i liked it alot...
it had a deep meaning in the poem!
it didnt rhyme... but that made it really good... keep it up!

Hey, This poem doesnt suck. I htink your emotion that youve used was brilliant and real. This made it a very meaningful read. It was very deep. I like this stanza:

You fall hard,
Cutting yourself in many ways,
Life becomes difficult,
And making it through seems too hard.

I like what your trying to say. Thought i have to say, i disliked the fact you used "hard" twice in the same stanza. Maybe you could find another word for it? Still an enjoyable read, Keep writing! xx

Yeah life does suck every once in a while... a person told me once that dont regreat ne thing that has happened b-cuz at one point it is exactly what u wanted.. and just remember... there is no happiness with out the pain... it does suck and it will take a while to get over them... but just stick in there... it wont always be this bad!!!

Heyy i love your poems there good, your a good writer. i can relate alot too :) anyways keep up the good work with both the quotes and poems <33kayy

Well done!! i really loved it!

Hye im new to the site but this is really good if u could comment one of mine id love tht

That poem was good, it has the right meaning to it, you have to find the one and to get that one person u have to try others to find him/her

Wow i loved it great write!

I am not sure I can help, but I did like this poem. It was true, and I think that many people would agree. Great job!

I love it soo much!

Ya i think all people who cut, go through this in some way or another...they know the consequenses but can't stop
it's like an addiction
well put

I deffinitley have to disagree with you. :] I don't think this sucks. I think it's very honest & true. It flowed really well. & Had a wonderful meaning. Everything seemed to fit in so well. It had a lot of emotion in it. & Also some imagery.

Doesn't suck :]

Beautifully penned.

Bri.x

Hey hun, i knew this poem looked familiar, i already commented it under bex, before i changed my screen name, its excellent!
much love and many kisses,
bex