It is a good poem, though it started not rhyming, and it was good i felt that i could live it, then you started to put rhymes, some of them were good like this one
Frightened by the evilness of man
Forever she runs as fast as she can
From a world open so wide
Wanting 2 do nothing but hide

but some were being forced.
take care.

I think this is overall a great poem!

Great Poem~ i lovesd it

Your poem was amazing...it really touched me.

That was really good!!!!!! OMg I love it keep up the good work!!!

That was really good!>....it is a great poem!...thanks for the comments and for adding me....im gonna add you for my favorites too...comment back?

Hey great work i kno th feeling. . . .
Endless tears wash her face
Every night
Tears of fears that never end
ilove those lines...
kitty

Hey thats a good poem...sounds like what i used to go through until i found the love of my life!! hang in there...unexpected things happen all the time when u are at ur worst!!!

Hye, this is a good read. I noticed you didnt have a proper rhyme scheme, yet the words oyu used were really effective. SOme of the rhymes were forced though. I can soemhow relate to htis poem, the vision of the mask and the real you who you feel no one acctually knows. A great read, keep writing and thanks for your ocmments! xx

The words you used were good for effectively conveying the emotion you are feeling inside. Again though, I hated the "IM language" you used in your poetry. It makes your work look clumsy, as if you don't really care for your poetry to look its best.

Wow.....this poem was soo awsome!!! i like this part "Can't escape so fast
But it doesn't seem like she can last
Her endless fears
Keep shedding more and more tears
Her tears drowning her very deep
Into a well long and steep" yup yup =) keep on writing cuz i really enjoyed this poem..

Well done. The emtion seemed real and heartfelt, I like that. The flow was off, you started out non rhyming, than you switched to rhyming in some places. although the word choice was excellent, some rhmes felt a bit forced. The shortcuts you used (2 for to culd fro could) wasn't really a good idea. there isn't room for short cuts in a poem. I think you would have gotten better responses if you would have wrote things out alittle bit. but other than that I liked this poem, and I think that you did a good job. Keep writting. I am sorry if my comment seem harsh, but I am just being honest. thanks for all the comments