I love these kinds of poems. I love dark depressing ones so this one is one that I really like. I love the last part of the poem it was my favorite part. The flow was very good. Your use od words was okay. There was a lot of emotion. You did a great job describing how the person felt. Good job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

I really enjoyed reading this one. It had a great flow and said a lot about the persons feelings. keep it up and please check out my poems. Thank you!

Woooo deep depressing, very desriptive, this is why i keep you on my favorites list. 5/5

Painful and emotional! 5/5

WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up...

I really liked this poem..it kind of makes me feel gloomy and dark at the same time..loved the flow as well 5/5