Mmm, a bit common, i like unique poems, not saying this wasnt good, i enjoyed it, it was sad, and moving.
i'd like more emotions within it, maybe more imagery too.
love Tara-Kay

Good poem i like it

You shouldn't cut.. it doesn't really help that much believe me think about everyone that cares about you.. and everyone that wants you to live.. think about how horrible it would be to die.. to rot in the ground.. to decay and let little insects eat you.. I know how it feels and i know how hard it is to stop cutting.. and how good it feels.. please for me if not anybody else... try to stop cutting.. it really doesn't help... and when you look back on it after you get older you will realize that it was probably the worst thing you will ever do... and if you want any help on how to stop cutting just IM me on yahoo.. my s/n is cherrybaby9361 and that is the same for aim... or if you have a myspace my url is clzak13 and just put zak for my last name

I don't really understand the reason for wanting to harm yourself. There's nothing that could make me want to cut myself. I hope you figure out what it is in life you need to make you happy. But if you don't, I think you should definitley talk to someone. I know you matter to someone and they wouldn't want to see you this way. Ok let me get out of mother mode lol. this poem overall is a really powerful write. 5/5

marcella

This is a good poem. i know a lot of people fell the same way as you do.
Keep your friends close to you and you might feel better.
5/5. great poem

Kalee

Wow, deep and emotional poem, paints verry clear images in my mind, addmittedly they scare me abit, but i can also understand what your going though, being and almost-ex-cutter!
love Steph